Monday, September 27, 2010

Vallyfair with my family

It was about two summers ago when my family thought it would be fun if we all went to valleyfair. So  my parents bought the tickets, and my mom packet the lunches. When we got there everyone ready to go and ride the rides! The first ride we went on was the crazy mouse, it was me, my mom, and my two sisters. Me and my older sister sat in the front, and my mom had to sit in the back with my little sister. The whole ride my mom and sister were screaming their heads off, and me and my sister were laughing at them. when everyone was done with that ride we went a took a old fashion photo. After we went on lots of some more rides, me and my brother went on the corkscrew. We tried to get my little sister to come with us but she was still freaked from the crazy mouse. everyone started to get hungry so we went back to the truck and had lunch. When we were done there was some pretty bad looking clouds coming are way. So we put r swimsuits on and went swimming before it started to rain. It was freezing outside but we still went on the water slides. Then it started to rain so we put are clothes back on and walked around until it stopped. After a hour with rain we kept on going on the rides, but only the ones with water, because we were already wet from the rain. When the rain finally to stop we went back on the rides. It was about time to leave but my dad wanted us all to go on the wild thing, but he only got me, my older sister, and brother to come with him. After that we went and got ice cream and then left. So that's my awesome story about the time I went to valleyfair with my family.

1 comment:

  1. I love valleyfair!! Some of your sentences didn't make sense because of some mistakes. Other than that I liked it (:

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